The 11th Commandment
The 11th Commandment
The Maas splats mocking her foam on my shoes as if asking aloud.
- "What have you expected? On what basis are your frustrated?"
My legs outstretch the pains of walking from the cemetery to the river.
- For 139 years we have known about it told as a commandment
but had
it disregarded and valued as a forgery. Small wonder.
What different
treatments do the other ten have?
This pensive discourse of mine has added up to the melancholy
of the
Crooswijk cemetery made me struggle with up to the
Hotel Willemsbrug, 6
De Boompjes.
- It looks as if
I will not see the hotel room where Moses
Wilhelm Shapira was lying
dead on his bed surrounded by a
stream of blood.
Although the
newspaper “Het Vaderland” in the library
suggested an elegant street to
be stretching along the
Rotterdam wharf of the Maas river, but steel
and concrete
greet me instead with a raised quay promenade over my
head
and a Rotterdam weekend traffic. No trace of any Hotel
Willemsbrug.
With her skyscrapers, cube houses and bridges,
Rotterdam town boosts
different pursuits today then she did
in 1884.
The exact cause
nags me what forced Wilhelm Moses Shapira,
a converted Jew, a
successful antique dealer, to commit
suicide on March 9, 1884, in Hotel
Willemsbrug, Rotterdam?
- Oh, what a folly! Fool of me to hope to find
clues in a hotel
room after 139 years!
I tried, I failed so far. I
fail again if I do not try again.
I fail the short story contest if my
grit and wit fail me to
figure out what made him to pull the trigger.
- “I’m shot! How nice! Thank you girls!”
A dimwit over my head on the raised quay promenade
bumps now
into a tall guy with dark glasses. A thick folder drops
from
under his armpit with a snap like a shot. Its clap would kick
a
pensive poet out of his rhymes. I feel as if the bullet
hits my bones
and duck-like Indiana Jones in the jungle.
A sepia toned, vintage look
shot circles from above down to
the cobblestones in front of my nose.
It shows a man in a
dark long frock coat with a bowler hat in hand. A
round
bearded face with a Victorian hairstyle. His rather Russian
face
is his autobiography, his plea for understanding.
- “Oh, it cannot be true!”
- But why did I hit upon Indiana Jones? Oh, Yes! The hat! The
broad
brimmed hat of the tall guy!
With the photo in hand, I look up to the
raised promenade,
ready to air my snide remark. I am confronting face
to face
with a stern look the bespectacled guy casts down to me. A
kind
of scowl radiates through his dark glasses, so I bottle up
all
my say.
- If I hurry forward this way, will he follow me?
Regardless of his cutting glance and glad of the heaven-sent
gift, I leg it to the
nearest stairway from the quay up.
- I hit my stride if I lengthen it.
However, if I assumed the tall guy
to be Indiana by his hat,
I should have calculated his stalk potential
as well.
- “Do you want to keep it?”
If one is born a low-down
boy, one lives with it all his
life. The tall guy cannot help showing
how stiff his neck
feels to tilt his head lower than 25 degrees. As he
pans his
head from left to right the tone of his voice makes this
attitude
tangible for his imagined audience.
- “I do not give an interview.”
- “Far from it! If I catered for one, I should question
myself first.”
- “Experience taught me how cheeky the reporters of your sort
are. They
strive for every bit of what belongs to me. But
unlike to me, they
flash my name only for a second in the
video. As did it Yoram Sabo in
his clip of “Shapira and I”.
Gut feeling to relationships is what
coffee to the mind.
Because it is not enough on its own, I invite my
bruised
casual acquaintance for some refreshments at the nearby
Sherlock’s
Place.
To my delight, the semi nostalgic vibe of the Sherlock’s His hands spread in his sudden proud rhythm his - Keep the lid open! I
am possessed by curiosity. How I wished what hides in his folder
delights my thirst for - “You narrowed your quest after Shapira’s suicidal motives - “What divine retribution can
science recognize?” - “When the bloodhound, Charles Clermont-Ganneau,
and the With these cryptic
forewarnings, the tall guy lowers his - “There is a Jordanian ancient settlement, next to the Although dark glasses work on concealing feelings and even - Are they the mood lightings of Sherlock’s Place reflecting? No! His glasses reflecting the glare of the Arabian sun screw One of
the four, a short and dumpy man, on his head a red fez In a swelter for sure, the second of the four, a tiny one in The Bedouin displays a sculpture there. The sheikh of the
comforts
him to share the content of his thick folder. He
carries it under his
armpit as a defence against the
universe.
documents
over the small square table.
My eyes chase his hands, as from Pandora’s
box, producing
many documents, old and new.
knowledge. How I wanted a goodbye letter
appears, explaining
what prompted Shapira to pull the trigger.
while the
divine retribution misses your eyes.”
prey, Moses Wilhelm Shapira, are both in check by the 11th
Commandment.
Now it is your turn to learn about it."
glasses, measures Sherlock’s
Place inside ambience at his
command, lifts and fits his dark glasses
on his nose again,
looks at me and says in a relaxed tone.
modern town,
named Dhiban. In 1868, amateur explorers and
archaeologists were
scouring the Middle East for evidence
proving the historicity of the
Bible. A Bedouin Emir led an
Anglican missionary, named Klein, to a
smoothed block of
basalt about a meter tall, 60 cm wide, and 60 cm thick,
bearing a
surviving inscription of 34 lines. Neither of them
could read the
text.”
the
illusions of communication, the tall guy’s dark
spectacles, to my
surprise, launch flickers now, then glow
silver unfolding life on
them.
up my eyes,
the same way four men are screwing their faces up
against the desert
wind. They circle with a staggering gait
in the sand, back and forth
around a slab. The slab lies
among other ruins, free and exposed to
view after thousands
of years, with inscription uppermost.
with a black
tassel hanging from its crown, sits on a
makeshift chair. He argues
with the others, near to drop the
white sunshade umbrella from his
hand.
a
long black coat, kneels by the slab exploring with care its
inscriptions.
Getting rid of collar and bowler hat, he starts
with missionary
devotion to sketching the stone’s shape. He
ignores the surrounding
row.
Bani-Hamideh tribe territory, tall and distant,
in his longsleeved tunic,
guards his land. His marked features, a thin
and prominent nose and
large liquid black eyes burning from
below his snow-white ghutra.
But hark! In a sinister tempo, the Bedouin puts his right hand on the
hilt of a
silver engraved scimitar tugged into his belt.
If there is a special
hell for the fourth man, the Bedouin is
stretching the sharp edge of
the scimitar to his throat.
The fourth one, a young man of 20, with his
refined French
manliness, and his handlebar moustache and chin-puff,
chooses
a soundless grin. Looking confident when steel tickles skin
does
not pull off anything. Pointless to tender an apology.
The tall guy's
voiced footnotes plunge into my film sequence.
- “In 1868, archaeology
provided a pretext for France
diplomacy to position herself in the Near
East amid rising
political opposition from Britain, Prussia, and
Russia. The
Mesha Stele was kicking a diplomatic race off among
France,
Britain, and Germany to possess and transcribe its
inscription.
The young Charles Simon Clermont-Ganneau in his
indiscreet behaviour
has been eliciting divine justice to
affect the Stele, Shapira and even
us in the long run.”
This voice-over comment of the tall guy brings
another scene
into my sight.
So I see in the French consulate station in Jerusalem how the - “Losers revenge
themselves by doing worse as Clermont-Ganneau does so.” My butt in does
not stop the voice-over reeling on Clermont-Ganneau. - “An
order came from the Damascus Vali, the Ottoman The spectacle's screen shows how the Bedouin storm the Now the Bedouin, in their fury,
lit a fire around the relic The dark glasses of the tall guy fracture now the Arab
young
Clermont-Ganneau, unscrupulous but careful to avoid
further
entanglement, bribes two of his Arab cronies of the
Adwan tribe,
enemies of the Bani-Hamideh. He pays them to
make a squeeze, an
impression, a reverse copy of the Mesha
stone.
I would never put off
that till tomorrow to see the divine retribution on him.
governor, for the
Bedouins to handle the stone over to
government officials.
Clermont-Ganneau, however,
miscalculated Bedouin reactions.”
cronies and wound
one with a spear. The other snatches the
still-wet paper from the
stone, stuffing the seven ripped
pieces into his robe pocket. He rides
to give them to
Clermont-Ganneau.
and deluge with water. The stone
fractures.
retribution
scene, too.
- Arabs fracture the stone, the stone fractures ClermontGanneau. - “A divine punishment, is it? An eye for an eye, fractions - “One may earn
intangible energies for all things, direct or - “What conclusion
did he draw from that endeavour? Changed - “On the contrary! As a consular agent proficient in - “Crusading most against what?” - “He contested his
scientific expertise to build by his
Divine
retribution renders each in accord with the feat.
for indiscretions? Is
it what the 11th Commandment warns us
about?”
indirect, visible or
invisible. Although Clermont-Ganneau
struggled for years to compile
readings and commentary on the
inscription. He lacked photos of the
Stela and the squeeze.
His efforts never resulted in an editio
princeps. Forces of
retribution never sleep.”
his diplomatic stance?”
Turkish, Arabic, or
Persian, he looked upon himself as the
crusader knight of
archaeology.”
diplomatic and educational
position grooming. His brazen
meddling turned the stone into a
stumbling block of Europe’s
broader national tensions. Next, he
ravelled in his crusade
against Shapira.”
Enhancing his rumination, the tall guy ranks the documents - "Clermont-Ganneau used against
Shapira what the 11th - “He might misdirect his mindfulness. His good intentions - “His heart sinned as well as his mind.” A photo of a bridge irritates the tall guy. A flat-top capped - "Is it the Willemsbrug
bridge?" - "Shot from the direction of the Hotel Willemsbrug." The townsfolk from 19th-century picture stare also in their - "They placed the body of Shapira, how the Rotterdam police - “What crime did Shapira commit to
deserve such a fate?”
spread over
the small square coffee table. Keeping his eyes
riveted on them, he
smiles at one, then drops it fuming.
Commandment warns us not to do - prejudice."
clothed with
his pride and vanity.”
kid gapes from there
as if stiffened by a gunshot went off in 1884.
outgrown pants
and tight working clothing, boots, stout and
durable footwear.
report
stated, to the Rotterdam General Cemetery in Crooswijk
of unidentified
drowned sailors. Hatred is not without sense.
Mordant contempt sharpens
its curved blade. It cuts backwards
also when it cuts forward. The 11th
Commandment predicts it
true.”
- “Still a few accept what the scrolls of leather, also Such a summary may draw
doubtful marks on my face, the tall - “Do you consider a consciousness independent of time to
be - “Are you talking of a God?” - “Yes, an acute
awareness, timeless who helps and guides. - “What has it got to do with
the Shapira Scrolls?” He selects more photos from the table. A map
shows the - “Dhiban, the
place where Clermont-Ganneau's brazen The tall guy then reads aloud from a book, I presume it
a
called the
Shapira Strips, proclaim. The written artefact of
the pre-historical
Jesus period implies a post-historical
Jesus' moral statement. In case
one wants to be a moral being
at all.”
guy is asking me about that
point-blank.
a lie?”
eastern side of the Dead Sea, Israel. Marked on the map
are
two locations, about 10 km from each other.
manipulation resulted in a broken
Mesha Stele. The other is
the cave by the river Wadi-Al-Mujib, where
the Bedouins found
the Shapira Scrolls. The Shapira Scrolls are
leather
fragments. Shapira bought sixteen leather strips from a
Bedouin.
They contain the Decalogue, the Ten Commandments, in
an ancient Hebrew
script.”
period journal, titled the Autobiography of Sir Walter
Besant.
- “I think about 1877, a certain Shapira, a Polish Jew
converted to
Christianity, called upon me mysteriously. A man
of handsome presence,
tall, with fair hair and blue eyes. He
had with him a document. He said
it would throw a flood of
light upon Archaeology. What was his
discovery? I saw a
piece, which he pulled out of his pocketbook. Its
text was in
the Phoenician characters like that of the Mesha Stone.
It
had been preserved; he told me, through being deposited in a
perfectly
dry cave. Then I suggested that he should make this
discovery known to
the world."
How a good intention interested advice tossed Shapira into
the
thorn thickets of his fate? What powers were gathering
around,
driving him into suicide? Was this advisor setting
forth his opinion,
indifferent whether taken but inspired by
the Almighty?
- “An easy counsel, positive, and costs nothing. Shapira pays
dearly for it.”
- “Did he scoot right up for his Calvary hill?”
- “No, let us make an
events calendar.”
- "What made him cautious?"
- "His Moabites artefact affair had stigmatized the letter F Eagerness thrills a shiver on my shoulder as
the tall guy - "The discovery of the Mesha Stele in 1868 Not only the cynical smile unveils the tall guy to be a - “Charles Clermont-Ganneau, clad in
crusader garments and - "Despite Clermont-Ganneau's wrath, he stood firm for
years - “Indeed. Until 1877, as I quoted
earlier the account of his - “And Sir Walter Besant set him on his path of no return.” - “As I told you before, timeless divine retribution gets at us - “But how is it related to the 11th Commandment?” He looks at me in astonishment. Am I speaking in vain? Am I - Would any year accomplish what it holds in store? Was the - "Shapira presented the
scrolls in Leipzig first in June - “He staked his fate. And why did
his attempt run the way it - “Because the Ten Commandments
are timeless warnings of consequences.” - “Prohibitions rather.” - “The wording emphasises the aftermath. Shapira's scrolls
already on him. Forger!”
puts the first date, 1868, down on a paper.
and how Clermont-Ganneau spoiled it by
his indiscreet diplomacy,
triggered significant interest in Moabites
artefacts. As a petty
trader, Shapira also hopped on the racket,
producing and
selling fake items of that nature in his tourist shop
on
Christian Street in Jerusalem. German archaeologists, who had
no
access to the Mesha Stele, rushed to buy a 1700 of these artefacts.”
devoted idealist, but also
how he goes on with his account.
committed by his calling, sued Shapira on a
charge of
forgery. Shapira defended himself, blaming his partner.
Sticking
to his small tourist shop, he swapped trading
profiles to Hebrew
manuscripts.”
and prepared for luck."
visiting Sir Walter Besant with the
manuscript in England.
all.”
never get
understood? Yes, it seems clear. Silly of me. And
drawing a deep
breath, he puts the next date down on the
paper: 1883.
11th Commandment as
divine retribution gathering shadows by
1883 already? Did the
bloodhound and the prey do what was
due?
1883. Then he offered to the British
Museum fifteen parchment
scrolls written in ancient Hebrew script.
These scrolls
contained the Ten Commandments. The asking price was
one
million British pounds."
did?"
especially,
there is a declarative clause after each commandment.
- “What can that be? - “I am thy God!” Something on my face
reflects my uncertainty, a stream The tall guy frowning concludes on my thoughts. He observes - “Hope had Shapira shun fear and bury his
head in the sand. I raise eyes and look at him because
I think I get the knack - “Patience!” - he says with his open rebuke. - “The British Museum
displayed under protected conditions Despite all my desire, my mind cannot find
relaxation. Frowning at me again to have patience, the tall guy
conveys
flowing underground and longing for
clarity and certainty but
finding doubt more fascinating.
the stars of my
diligence glimmering in their ambiguous
orbits but notes also the bulb
of my perspective veiled.
You can explain things to people, but you cannot
understand
things to people.”
of what fuels his Jeff Bezos quotation.
the parchment scrolls inviting
learned professors to inspect
and analyse the scrolls. The accomplished
eggheads were
hanging over the manuscript when one Hebrew scholar
exclaimed
with conviction: This is one of the few things which could
not
be a forgery!”
the ebb and flow of the situation Shapira experienced.
- “He was alert to a hidden danger. He had to be.” - “Anything but not
that!” - “Yes, Charles Clermont-Ganneau suddenly appeared in London - “What did he do?” - “He requested permission to inspect the scrolls.” - “And Shapira? “ - “Refused but in vain. The British Museum had to allow His overt opinion and how he lists events transmit the weird - “The crusader played well his part.” - “Was he not advised to buckle down?” - “Hindered although but feared as
well as respected.” - “The Museum allowed him a thorough scrutiny!" - “No, but requested to glance at the Scrolls from afar, Despite the sad end known, one always hopes for some divine
amid
the excitement reflected by the local press. He secured
himself to get
into the spotlight at once.”
inspection.”
scene of
tension and suspicion.
together with
the general public. However, all the fat was in
the fire already.”
intervention, instead of retribution, but God' intentions are unalterable.
- “It took only an hour for
Clermont-Ganneau to conclude the
scrolls to be forgeries. I know, he
said, how to produce such
a manuscript. Although the parchment is from
the margins of
Hebrew manuscripts of considerable antiquity. The
writing is
that of yesterday.”
- “Did he immediately report his
view to the press?”
With a look of reproach, the tall guy rearranges
his
documents.
- “Media like a dog needs to sniff a scandal.
Clermont-Ganneau
claimed his throne among the patron saints of archaeology.”
- "But how that now, after 139 years, is his glory vanishing?”
I have to become more familiar with the force of the 11th
Commandment for
building the gist of my short story contest.
My mere listing of
Shapira's life events would produce a
genre of crime. It satisfies,
although cause-and-effect
concepts, at a lateral level. But there is
still a verical angle the
tall guy has not revealed yet. How dramatic to
illustrate the
epiphany of divine justice!
The sour smile of the
tall guy tells it otherwise.
- “If honour had any value, expecting the
coming out of a
square deal was futile. The British Museum declared the
scrolls fakes.
Shapira might have taken his scrolls away with
no offer of a hundred
pound, not to speak of a million. It
was too much for him. He left
London, leaving the scrolls
behind in the British Museum. He committed
suicide nine
months later, in March 1884, in Hotel Willemsbrug, Rotterdam.”
Shapira might have held his anger and shame in control for
months, assuming
perhaps discretion, justice or professional
solidarity to come
about.
- A hollow hope, as is mine, to get the effects of the 11th
Commandment
across to me at long last.
My agitation, however, aided the tall guy
only in detailing
the distressing timeline of the scrolls.
- “In 1885, the scrolls were up for an auction by Sotheby’s.
Bernard Quaritch
bought them for 10 pounds and 5 shillings.
Next, Dr Philip Brookes
Mason bought the manuscript to
exhibit it. The whereabouts of the
Scroll after 1889 are
unknown.”
Exasperation bearing down on me
consumes my patience.
- “The 11th Commandment, however sententious,
denotes no
divine justice. Baseless deduction creates bias, pressing
its
prey to the wall. It cannot have more polished marbles.
Pointless
to extrapolate backwards from a known experience to
the abstract idea.
What is the 11th Commandment for
when any scofflaw shrugs all the ten off?”
- “As digits grow limitless on the
number line, they stop
neither in a positive nor in a negative
direction. The Ten
Commandments have their consequences on wrongs as
well as
victims.”
- “But what does it say? For God's sake!”
- “Thou shalt not hate your brother in your heart. I am God
thy God.”
- “Oh bugger! Clermont-Ganneau did not face the music. That is all
what he affronts
now?! By the way, when did he die? In 1923?”
The tall guy stands up and
gathers his documents into their
folder, towering above the cosy mood
of Sherlock's Place. His
pensive conclusion does not let rest my want
for a fair and
square divine retribution.
- “Time does not bind
limitless. Clermont-Ganneau’s bias
tossed Shapira into despair and
suicide, also the Scrolls
into the dustbin for 139 years. The fair
scientific deduction
together with it. A 139 years later, today,
literary
phylogeny, topography and nominal syntax analysis in the
lights
of linguistic, internal biblical evidence and epigraph
records -
despite still not possessing the original strips -
transform the
Shapira Scrolls into the oldest leather
fragments of man. Shapira had
them 64 years earlier than
Bedouins found the Qumran Scrolls in
1947.”
The tall guy leaves for the street in his leisured stride. The sepia vintage picture of Shapira is looking back to me
His
broad-brimmed hat passes a nod only as it disappears at
the corner.
from the coffee
table with his begging eyes for
acknowledgement.
P.S.: Inspired by Shlomo Guil: In Search of the Shop of Moses Wilhelm Shapira,
the
Leading Figure of the 19th Century Archaeological Enigma
You have such a gift for vivid description-- so sharp and insightful!
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